Commuters showing their appreciation to the bus driver.
By. Laurelle Policarpio
One thought on “Thank You to Bus Drivers”
– the idea is a good place to start – but maybe needs to be expanded/exaggerated to create an effect
or express a larger idea –
– is it about gratitude? the weird politeness of people in Guelph? it’s unclear the larger idea at play
– perhaps more more more and even looping? cutting out more transitions?
how important is it that it’s clear it’s on the bus?
I appreciate how many times you recorded it and worked on adaptations based on critique
– good effort on this one!
– the idea is a good place to start – but maybe needs to be expanded/exaggerated to create an effect
or express a larger idea –
– is it about gratitude? the weird politeness of people in Guelph? it’s unclear the larger idea at play
– perhaps more more more and even looping? cutting out more transitions?
how important is it that it’s clear it’s on the bus?
I appreciate how many times you recorded it and worked on adaptations based on critique
– good effort on this one!