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  1. – the idea is a good place to start – but maybe needs to be expanded/exaggerated to create an effect
    or express a larger idea –
    – is it about gratitude? the weird politeness of people in Guelph? it’s unclear the larger idea at play
    – perhaps more more more and even looping? cutting out more transitions?
    how important is it that it’s clear it’s on the bus?
    I appreciate how many times you recorded it and worked on adaptations based on critique
    – good effort on this one!

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